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hilly-rose submitted a contest entry to Write a letter or poem to or about a loved one who passed away and share how they inspire you 2 months, 2 weeks ago
My Trinity of Wise Women
I’m suddenly aware of frigid air;
A chill to my very core.
It’s only been a few months,
I miss you mom.
This is a cold I’ve never felt before,
Rising up behind me-
…. the air is compelling.
It shines, the air is in my sight.Aunt Lisa, you taught me-
To see differently, to be different.
You two showed me the beauty of I…
Grandma, two decades since you were here.
I can feel your smile and smell Gardenia.
In your bed mom,
time itself stopped.
I cannot sit here much longer.
I scrub the bathtub,
I’ve always hated wet hair.
Yet I saw an orange strand or two,
I set them aside,
As the unfamiliar air continued to rise.
Rise above expectations-
Rise above the concept of perfection.
This air is so refreshing,
Cold breeze in a hot and muggy night.
I can feel the support,
A love more than unconditional.
Unbreakable, unshakeable.
An unfamiliar & unwavering support.
Personal- I feel the tears
They fall as I write,
So, as long as there’s fresh air,
I will continue to rise.Mom, it’s been seventy days,
Since you took yourself away.
I feel my lost idols,
In my heart and around my neck.
Heaven sent pearls-
Of beauty and wisdom adorn me.
I watch the irredescent bubbles,
The heat of the water,
Contrast of cold air.
Mom I’ll honor your words,
I shan’t give into despair.– Hillary Rosenthal
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I remember the hardest part of losing my Grandfather was finding his things everywhere. A hat, some clothing, golf clubs, things that I couldn’t use but I couldn’t throw away. I am sorry for your loss and for the pain you feel right now. It will get better, eventually, the pain will become more bittersweet. I wish the best for you.
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Hillary, I am so incredibly sorry for your loss. Your words are heartfelt and beautiful. Keep taking each day one at a time. Your mom and aunt are so proud of you. Sending you lots and lots of hugs. <3 Lauren
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