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londonpoetenane submitted a contest entry to Write a letter or poem to your younger self sharing what you love most about him/her 3 months ago
RISE ABOVE
Little one
You know what I love
I love a rare soul
You can’t see them
Until one day
Voting starts September 27, 2024 12:00am
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I love this poem! The last line, “Until one day,” inspires me. In those words, you capture how we grow as humans until one day we are able to finally see our true souls. Thank you for sharing!
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Absolutely! I now see me and hope this inspires others to see themselves and their true colors that lead them where they need to be!
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Wowww, ” you can’t see them until one day…”
You can unpack so much within this line alone…it really gives the audience time to meditate on what one day looks like or what they would like it to look like, then how to get there!
So, much beauty in a rare soul!
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Thank you, your kind words. So much beauty in each individual, just have to focus you and not your surroundings(;
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