• whitjr submitted a contest entry to Group logo of Write a letter or poem about your favorite day of 2023Write a letter or poem about your favorite day of 2023 1 years, 6 months ago

    CONTEST SUBMISSION: FAVORITE DAYS 2023: POEM: BLACK MOOSE

    The following poem is my entry to the contest… as well as being a poem about an experience with a moos in the wilds of Colorado. Being camped near Monarch Pass [elevation 11.350 ft), maybe a couple thousand feet lower on the banks of the North fork of the Arkansas River in June of 2023. I trust that you’ll enjoy the piece, and leave me a comment or two! Respectfully submitted, Ray Whitaker

    BLACK MOOSE

    It resonates with me
    my encounter with another mysticism of nature
    at the edge of the mountain glen.
    While chancing to be near it
    the large, black mass standing stationary in the aspens
    as if to be unnoticed by being still

    a bull moose eating leaves from above it’s head
    a thin line of silver fur
    going from mighty shoulder to mid back
    young antlers soon to be a fierce armament
    now in velvet, growing
    as if to scoop up the world.

    Moving closer
    keeping a mature pine betwixt
    the likely over a thousand pounds of magnificence
    and my wonder

    thus occupied I did not worry
    when he stopped eating
    looking in my direction
    standing there wondering about me perhaps
    as he stood in the dappled sunlight.
    Astonished at the proximity
    noticing the depth of these brown eyes
    pushing souls together, mine to his
    brown, mine, to brown, his
    iris’ different, mine round, his oval

    being in the moment of no thought
    now wondering if he had a name
    no feeling of fear in that closeness
    only around twenty paces separating us
    the sun shone on me as I looked
    and as if I felt that regal power-black fur
    a strength, assurance, commanding the ground
    he stood on, like owning the very earth.

    He is next to my tree now
    having moved so silently
    and keeping the thick pine between us,
    our eyes locked still
    getting what each other had to give
    my consciousness mingling
    with the being of this immense creature
    his long neck craning around, reaching nearly in my space.

    I moved away, breaking the mesh
    keeping the pine tree between we two
    having realized this tree
    was woefully small
    having become a wood beetle now uncovered under the bark
    I retreated to the next few tall pines nearby.

    I am the Rhinoceros Beetle now.

    Our conversation had not ended
    tho no words had been spoken out loud
    no malice felt, only a near wistfulness
    from the moose and I.

    Like a translator would be appreciated
    to move the instances together somehow

    staring into each other’s eyes
    for longer still
    feeling the thoughts
    each having our own insights
    of consciousness
    and intuitiveness

    that powerful rippling muscled black now moving away
    my humanness moved in this moment.

    Even wanting to know where all this would go
    I did not follow deeper into this thicket, his woods.

    Ray Whitaker

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