“I know the stress will have you crying rivers on the inside that you never let water your cheeks
But you need to face your fears, or the dam will explode“
Wow!!! Have you written a book? You really should and let me know so I can buy!!! I finish mine 2023 and currently waiting for a miracle with the person I asked to write my foreword 😀
I just released an eBOOK entitled Random Thoughts (which encompasses all of my favorite topics of poetry I like to address, along with a few that don’t come up as much). If you’re interested, I can send you the link…once again thank you for sharing this moment with myself and poetry!
“Staying in a comfortable pattern only leads to a broken record repeating the line you hate to hear“ can we share this to the world! The stagnant waters where people’s remains remain.
Yes, totally more self-reflection and challenging ourselves in order to see a better world from the better version of us, is where it starts. Thank you for sharing your time with this piece
The weight of loneliness carried on your shoulders has always been the love in your heart, your angel, your guidance, you just have to listen, you were never alone (;
Thank you so much! I love that same phrase, and the boy in the story, my high school sweetheart, it’s been over 20 years. Communication skills were not developed back then… One day I will find him so I no longer have to look into the sky but into his heart, the brightest star…my star😉
Beautifully written and so true…I’ve tried to write my story but can’t seem to pencil down the negativity. Poetry is to beautiful, never loose your peace.
I love your words to yourself, positively you I presume! “There wouldn’t me, If there hadn’t been you” So true yet some of us are still running lol. Thank you for the uplift🥰
I love this poem! The last line, “Until one day,” inspires me. In those words, you capture how we grow as humans until one day we are able to finally see our true souls. Thank you for sharing!
Wowww, ” you can’t see them until one day…”
You can unpack so much within this line alone…it really gives the audience time to meditate on what one day looks like or what they would like it to look like, then how to get there!
So, much beauty in a rare soul!
London, your words capture the feelings we have when we lose someone close to us. When someone who inspired and moved us dies, it can feel like loneliness will overtake us. Luckily, we have the hope of being with them again one day to sustain us. Thank you for sharing your experience.
The weight of loneliness carried on your shoulders has always been the love in your heart, your angel, your guidance, you just have to listen, you were never alone (;
Can you feel it
Hear or see it
At first zip
No need to trip
The moment I glance
Another chance
Shooting through and through
Oh the view
An overwhelming sigh
Boy do I feel high
Relief
Together in breif
You see it
Committed
A safety net
Make me sweat
Your the someone I’d put first
Wrap yourself up in his comfort
I wanna scream
Wake me from this dream
Flounder with ease
It’s me you shall please
Whole body’s weak
I can’t even speak
Minds in a trance
A little love and romance
Souls a bliss
It’s you that I miss
Into the frosty blizzards of winter
No time shall hinder
Continuous breeze through the crisp Spring air
Come and go as you please, no despair
Entering warm Summer nights
With all of you in site
Beneath the trees of Fall leaves
Oh the web we wove and continue to weave
In the midst of the dark
Making my mark
Manifestation of orbs
It’s you that I adore
If I could touch you, just once
You know it’s you that I hunt
I look up, I see you
Full view and I pursue
The world turns
Heart burns, it yearns
Tender Love let us feast
Together in peace
Serenity, oh the intensity
I melt
Under your belt
Orion
This is a beautifully written poem, London. Love is such a wonderful thing and I am glad that being with your partner brings you this overwhelming peace and happiness. My favorite part of this would be when you said “Oh the web we wove and continue to weave” because being in love can bring you to many new adventures and things you wouldn’t have…read more
Thank you so much! I love that same phrase, and the boy in the story, my high school sweetheart, it’s been over 20 years. Communication skills were not developed back then… One day I will find him so I no longer have to look into the sky but into his heart, the brightest star…my star😉
Your poem is a reflection I believe on your passions for life, being loved and cherished. It touched my heart and soul. I read it 3 times. It has a heartbeat all it’s own and yet it is your heartbeat.