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  • jenawrites shared a letter in the Group logo of PoetryPoetry group 1 years, 4 months ago

    Voices

    Deep sorrow and emptiness inside
    When the voices judge and criticize
    Not the ones outside, the ones in my mind
    Those ones are the worst kind

    They know all of my flaws
    They remember every single fault
    They’re the reason I stay in bed
    And ignore everyone’s calls

    I started talking back to them
    Told them to shut up and go away
    That only created more chaos
    For me to live in every day

    I talk to myself more than anybody else
    Call me insane, but what goes on inside my brain
    Is what I have to deal with more than anybody else
    And I don’t want to be in this pain

    Deep confusion, yet hope inside
    When the voices open up and realize
    Not the ones outside, the ones in my mind
    Those are the most important kind

    They see all of my flaws
    They forgive every single fault
    They recognize the self-defeating patterns
    And they take time to pause

    I started talking back to them
    Told them they weren’t that bad
    Decided to stop judging myself
    And forgave myself for being mad

    I talk to myself more than anybody else
    Call me insane, but what goes on inside my brain
    Is what I have to deal with more than anybody else
    And I have nothing to lose, and everything to gain

    Deep alignment and happiness inside
    When the voices listen and empathize
    Not the ones outside, the ones in my mind
    Those are the most important kind

    They love all of my flaws
    Compassion is the new default
    They’ve become my new best friends
    And it feels much better than it was

    I started talking back to them
    Told them they’re here to stay
    We are creating a beautiful life
    That I can enjoy every day

    I talk to myself more than anybody else
    Call me insane, but what goes on inside my brain
    Is what I focus on more than anybody else
    And nothing would grow without the rain

    Jena

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    • Damn, Jena! This is so good! I think we have all fought with that inner voice that’s filled with self-doubt, fear and criticism. But to dig deep and find the strength, confidence and self love to silence that voice is what it really means to tap into your true power and inner strength. This is so well said, and I think so many people, myself included, can relate to this. This poem is truly a gift. Thank you soooo much for sharing. <3 Lauren

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      • Thank you so much, Lauren! I appreciate your kind words and feedback and am so happy to have a place to share my poetry and feel welcomed! When I first started writing it, I honestly was writing this as a song, but I don’t play any instruments so I’m not quite sure how to get it to that point yet LOL. maybe one day! in the meantime I’m so happy to share it here and I am glad that you could relate, and hope others do as well!

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        • Very nice poem here. I appreciated the four line stanzas, and the deeply honest self-inquiry. The “too many voices” part coincided with the poems nicely! Looking forward to reading more of yiur work.

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          • Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem, and I appreciate your kind words. I used to write poetry a lot when I was younger, and I am happy to be getting back into it!

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    • Jenna! It was pleasure to read your work. The structure of your poem really made me want to give my own a more formulaic approach.

      Nevertheless, I enjoyed it a lot and encourage you to keep writing at your behest.

      Cheers.

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      • Thank you, Josh! Thank you for reading my poem and I am definitely going to start dedicating more time to writing.

        I thank you for taking time to comment your feedback, and appreciate your kindness!

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